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i.

"no thank you, i'll just stay here
and watch the sun."

this is the longest night to ever
fill up the space between now and then.
higher than me and lower than you,
everything is spinning in two's and fours.


ii.

your's and mine, midnight and 12:00pm.
you and me, coming and going.

the afternoon was spent and we gave up the dawn
in taxes. i was playing south and you were north;
orbitting and moving with a stare that could
even hold pluto in his tracks.
i couldn't wait and you couldn't move.

now there is nothing
left.


iii.

like two winds colliding we clapsed winter
with frostbitten hands: white flurries
and blue lips to touch.

we were once explorers like columbus and
galileo, mapping our footprints while stumbling upon angels.
underneath the snow we banked on moments as
i constructed maps of your iris's and you claimed
to have found eden in decemeber.

we were going to be famous you know.


iv.

above,
celestial warriors transform into burning candles
in the atomspheric flames.
together, we were not heroes. see how it burns?

9-1-1, what is your emergency?
gravity is too strong for me and from here
you are nothing more than a broken satellite
yearning to be a comet. (check mate, you said)


v.

sol is rising and you are falling- still-
a transparent warmth is omniscent and it is filling me up.
winter has eaten through its welcome and it's time for me to say
what you never could: good bye.
©2009 ~distinguish
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Author's Comments

imagine the things i'll write when i actually meet love!





copyright © 2009 amanda jury, aka passionately at deviantart.com & distinguish at deviantart.com. this poem is not to be used anywhere for any purpose.

date: april 12, 2009

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this is lovely like wondertastic sparklebeams and sunshine rainbows. you are gloroius.
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i tend to fumble through compliments, but i can say you are the morning and i am gratitude.
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you make me want to cry in happiness with your words, and you make me want to cry in sadness that you're not getting nearly enough attention that you so deserve for them. <3
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you make me shine with thirty-degree smiles because your comments are brilliant and so are you and i appreciate it oh so much.

<33
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and even your comments are poetic, you make me giggle like a little girl.
<3

you already shine, you just don't know it :heart:
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Wow wow wow wow.. WOOOW!

This... I-... Wow..

Loving it.
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Lol, thanks!
And eh, right back at ya!

I'm soooo in love with your work, I wish I could write like that... My work is nothing compared to yours...

Keep it up!

--
\"Made all the colours go poof
watch out, insanity lies around the corner
she awaits trust that has been lurking around
we all have different faces
never forget your own\"
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thankthankthankyou. <3 i shall, i do.

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